Presentation: 7
I agree with my classmates who think that, that day I was too nervous, because I didn't prepare it enough maybe... But for my surprise It was been better than I was thought in a first moment. However, finally I decided to do it, as a result, too many stops. My other problem was that I didn't see the people, perhaps because If I had seen them, I would have been too nervous.
Body language: 7
Well, my levels in English didn't let me to use high vocabulary, however I used the specific words about my research issue like reactive plaster, needle and others. In general good, but I think it would be better.
Structure: 7
Sincerely, the order of explanation was the correct, but instead the video I could have broght the material to pick up myself for example to explain better the method which diabetics still everyday. Definitely I have a 7 too in this part because I think I could have done different.
Content: nearly 30
Here it doesn't depends on my the mark, because maybe there were a variety of opinions about content. It depends on every person and if he likes the topic.
Language: 14
In my opinion I never use high language like other classmates, and it is a problem because in this case if I don't learn high vocabulary I won't improve my level and instead of good marks there will be normal marks. However, before every oral presnetation I revise the links.
Pronunciation:6
Well in this apart a lot of people have problems except natives and other good students. I don't have a matture pronunciation yet but I think it was good than other times. Sonia said me the words that I didn't said good and If my memory doesn't lie me, they are "hereditary", "issue", "characterized" and "prova" thats it is prove or test.
To conclude, maybe I put myself a high mark, but in my opinion the oral was better than the first.
Sorry people, for the moment I don t put the video but I am trying to do it.
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divendres, 5 de març del 2010
dimarts, 24 de novembre del 2009
Oral Presentation: Plastic Surgery
Who made the perfect presentation? I evaluate the presentations together. In my point of view we used many resources like powerpoint, images, but we didn't used a video, sound and real material. Resources were focused in the topic , obviously, and
I think in difficult topics like plastic surgery they are very important to understand the meaning. I think the important problem was only the timming per person, because we spoke very fast. Sometimes I was looking the audience because the other day I was very nervous like the other classmates so the majority of time I saw the floor. I didn't read from my notes and I made a movement or gesture in my last viewpoint to make people notice the picture of a woman without ear. I think we organized our ideas in order of importance, for example I began answering the question: What 's plastic surgery, and after I explained the resources that are used in plastic surgery. We used markers markers to help the people, like first of all, secondly, on the one hand... on the other hand... I didn't do the conclusion consequently I can't evaluate it but I think Marta finished very well with qoutes.
In my opinion we introduced new information because plastic surgery isn' t a famous topic. The information wasn' t extensive but the viewpoints were justified and we showed a lot of examples. Sources were properly referenced and the message was clear. I think I used a normal grammar with future simple , present simple althought I didn' used past or other variety of times.
The vocabulary wasn' t poor but if I used more synonyms and expressions it was more correct. I used the connectors everytime, but, furthermore, also, however... and fillers to understand the pauses. Everybody knows me and my pronunciation isn' t wonderfull to compare with native people, Robin, Jake.. or people who has a good pronunciation like Marta, Julia and Claudia, but I think my pronunciation was comprehensible the other day. Sometimes I changed the tone of voice and I spoke in a fluid continum, only with one interruption. Well, I don't like put my marks but I think in this oral my mark was near 72,5 per cent. Byeee ;)
I think in difficult topics like plastic surgery they are very important to understand the meaning. I think the important problem was only the timming per person, because we spoke very fast. Sometimes I was looking the audience because the other day I was very nervous like the other classmates so the majority of time I saw the floor. I didn't read from my notes and I made a movement or gesture in my last viewpoint to make people notice the picture of a woman without ear. I think we organized our ideas in order of importance, for example I began answering the question: What 's plastic surgery, and after I explained the resources that are used in plastic surgery. We used markers markers to help the people, like first of all, secondly, on the one hand... on the other hand... I didn't do the conclusion consequently I can't evaluate it but I think Marta finished very well with qoutes.
In my opinion we introduced new information because plastic surgery isn' t a famous topic. The information wasn' t extensive but the viewpoints were justified and we showed a lot of examples. Sources were properly referenced and the message was clear. I think I used a normal grammar with future simple , present simple althought I didn' used past or other variety of times.
The vocabulary wasn' t poor but if I used more synonyms and expressions it was more correct. I used the connectors everytime, but, furthermore, also, however... and fillers to understand the pauses. Everybody knows me and my pronunciation isn' t wonderfull to compare with native people, Robin, Jake.. or people who has a good pronunciation like Marta, Julia and Claudia, but I think my pronunciation was comprehensible the other day. Sometimes I changed the tone of voice and I spoke in a fluid continum, only with one interruption. Well, I don't like put my marks but I think in this oral my mark was near 72,5 per cent. Byeee ;)
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