Oral Presentation: Plastic Surgery

Who made the perfect presentation? I evaluate the presentations together. In my point of view we used many resources like powerpoint, images, but we didn't used a video, sound and real material. Resources were focused in the topic , obviously, and

I think in difficult topics like plastic surgery they are very important to understand the meaning. I think the important problem was only the timming per person, because we spoke very fast. Sometimes I was looking the audience because the other day I was very nervous like the other classmates so the majority of time I saw the floor. I didn't read from my notes and I made a movement or gesture in my last viewpoint to make people notice the picture of a woman without ear. I think we organized our ideas in order of importance, for example I began answering the question: What 's plastic surgery, and after I explained the resources that are used in plastic surgery. We used markers markers to help the people, like first of all, secondly, on the one hand... on the other hand... I didn't do the conclusion consequently I can't evaluate it but I think Marta finished very well with qoutes.

In my opinion we introduced new information because plastic surgery isn' t a famous topic. The information wasn' t extensive but the viewpoints were justified and we showed a lot of examples. Sources were properly referenced and the message was clear. I think I used a normal grammar with future simple , present simple althought I didn' used past or other variety of times.

The vocabulary wasn' t poor but if I used more synonyms and expressions it was more correct. I used the connectors everytime, but, furthermore, also, however... and fillers to understand the pauses. Everybody knows me and my pronunciation isn' t wonderfull to compare with native people, Robin, Jake.. or people who has a good pronunciation like Marta, Julia and Claudia, but I think my pronunciation was comprehensible the other day. Sometimes I changed the tone of voice and I spoke in a fluid continum, only with one interruption. Well, I don't like put my marks but I think in this oral my mark was near 72,5 per cent. Byeee ;)