My english progress

I detect a clear improvement in my compositions which are rather correct and structured than last year. In my first document , an e-mail byt the teacher I didn't have enough experience. In the last composition I have done I was decided to talk about René Descartes. In most of our last compositions we can see easily the improvement we have delevoped on occount of the knowledge we recieved by the english teachers in these two years.

The evidence of the differences between both shows that I have learn more about the structure of the compositions. In the first composition I have made by the period of batxillerat I was empty of resources so I was using very poor vocabulary. Many "buts" instead of Nevertheless, however, in spite of, Even though, ...etc. The length of them is also a fact which I have developed, as a result, now I write more paragraphs as well as a better fluence in sonme texts.

In The first oral presentation I was talked about the football world, concretly about the european competitions such as the Champions league, the world cup and more. However now, form my point of view I improved a bit even though I'm still nervous. The last oral, I was talked about my own research work whose topic is the diabetis, one of the horrible sickness. The language I have used is more specificic that in the last year. In this amount of documents I can see a development, of course, with a lot of hours of work diary work, doing the blogger. This is the best way to learn.