My english competence in 2010

In my opinion The best oral presentation I have done was made during the trip to London this year with my friend Jake Bridges. http://frapu17portfolio.blogspot.com/2010/05/londons-oral.html. There we have many resources which contributed to improve the oral like the red telephone boxes, the taxi cabs. I think is not the same to do an oral in a different location as many poeple have done. I chosed this evidence because is a wonderfull memory which I never forget, the trip to London.
From my point of view the best written evidence is that: http://frapu17portfolio.blogspot.com/2010/05/rene-descartes.html

I choosed this written evidence because is one of my last composition this year and I thought it Would be one of my bests accodirng to my level and related to the structure content, vocabulary. I was decided to talk about Descartes because is a philosopher so this subject is one of my preferences. Despite is a diffcult task to study them, is more interesting than many people say. There, I was talked about his thinking way and his point of view in the life.

In conclusion I think the cause which produced an improvement on me is the behaviour of our english teachers who everymoment were adding extra work. This is the correct way to steps to success. Also, my sacrificated task in this language can contribute to increase my marks. Finally I have no doubt that these high marks never couldn't be possible without the support of the teachers. Thank you Sonia for all your efforts ;)

My english progress

I detect a clear improvement in my compositions which are rather correct and structured than last year. In my first document , an e-mail byt the teacher I didn't have enough experience. In the last composition I have done I was decided to talk about René Descartes. In most of our last compositions we can see easily the improvement we have delevoped on occount of the knowledge we recieved by the english teachers in these two years.

The evidence of the differences between both shows that I have learn more about the structure of the compositions. In the first composition I have made by the period of batxillerat I was empty of resources so I was using very poor vocabulary. Many "buts" instead of Nevertheless, however, in spite of, Even though, ...etc. The length of them is also a fact which I have developed, as a result, now I write more paragraphs as well as a better fluence in sonme texts.

In The first oral presentation I was talked about the football world, concretly about the european competitions such as the Champions league, the world cup and more. However now, form my point of view I improved a bit even though I'm still nervous. The last oral, I was talked about my own research work whose topic is the diabetis, one of the horrible sickness. The language I have used is more specificic that in the last year. In this amount of documents I can see a development, of course, with a lot of hours of work diary work, doing the blogger. This is the best way to learn.

'Green' exercise quickly 'boosts mental health'

Once in a while I want to stay alone in a forest or a lake, it produces a specific type of pleasure on me which contibute to boost my mind. Besides, maybe there are many people who look for a hidden location separated of other society.

Healthy doctors just recently said this task is full of benefits to improve the strees situtions. Just five minutes of exercise near a park or a lake can boost mental health. Lastly, researchers looked at evidence was found some improvements on mood and self -esteem.

The research include many different activities like cycling, walking, fishing, farming...

The most effects would seen in only five minutes. We can also go to rural sones where also we can enjoy the nature, the animals and some thing that now are difficult to find.

The posiutive effects were clarly apparent but of a smaller magnitude.

Is evident that now the new trend is the green exercise that in the next few years perhaps will be accepted for most of us. Police recomendations are often discussed to solve the mental health problems so many people prefer relax himself. This is another benefit which produce the nature on the society that shows the magic task it do sometimes.

BBC Sport

Wayne Rooney who is a fantastic player of the "Red Devils", has injured himself playing against Stoke city in the last match of this season that already has finished. Therefore, perhaps Ronney won't go to the next announcement of england's national team. However, his manager Sir Alex Ferguson said that he could be in the next Capello announcement seeing that he thinks the injure isn't too serious.

Even though the injury, Rooney is able to go this summer to South Africa. Besides, he was probably sad because he lost Golden Boot award instead of Drogba who scored two goals more than him.

In my opinion next summer Spanish team will win the Cup, I'm not a patriothic guy so is my own opinion because our national team is full of players who won many trophies and they have more experience than the others.

Related to the people who want the Golden Boot, Leo Messi is on the top with thirty two goals. In fact, there are many people who think Messi is the best of all players, nevertheless I think he is too well talked about on the media, there is too much talk about him being the best player in the world but i think that they go over the top.

In Barça's interests, there are players such as Drogba or Rooney...

london's oral

The beekeper

Frankie Simpson
Castelló d' Empúries
17486 7 Rentador street

Dear Laura, Iwas thinking about you since last summer when we were discussing about books and other stories related to the most important agricultors around Catalunya.

I'm interested to explain you a disaster that happened in my village where a beekepere was working a beehive and was attacked by the bees. In spite of the fact that the doctors thought it wasn't dangerous, the beekeper became ill owing to the big quantity of toxic substances that he could have in his stomach.

Furthermore his family not even knew about the disaster so it was terrible. Perhaps yoy want to know exactly how he died therefore now I will explain it to you. He was in the farm, looking for hooney and then, two minutes later he was attacked by twenty worker bees, as a result, his body was completely swolled. Unfortunately in this moment nobody was in the farm so he died in only ten minutes.

Among all the beekepers ten per cent suffer problems of this kind. It was a terrifying ending.
Lovee
Frankie

Opinion essay

Nowadays, there is a tremendous confusion about what the mind-body therapies are among the popullation. Despite there are many hidden healers I think in our country a lot of people believe in this kind of therapies whereas other people say that they are a waste of time. In my opinion, they can produce on someone real benefits related to the relax or concentration.

Firstly, I believe the mind depends only on how we used before. For instance, is not a lie that If you go to a therapy like yoga, you will have a clear mind. However, sometimes we can't achieve our challenges or find pleasure through those therapies.
Besides this is a difficult issue to talk because perhaps there are an amountof different views. Nevertheless, seeing that there aren't hard problems among people who are stilling yoga or relaxation, I conclude this isn't dangerous.

Furthermore, apart from these opinions, many people show that all of us are fortunately full of benefits in this matter. Hopefully, the results are better than anybody could imagine. These type of experiments with our bodies have done in order to finish with our stressful lifestyles. In conclusion, there is no doubt that this kind of therapies contribute to increase the pleasure among all of us.

René Descartes

I was decided to write about the ideas which has had this witty phylosopher called René Descartes who was born in France at the sixteenth century.

According to René all the wishes that we could have is some moments of our lifes can be reduced by the power of the mind. For this reason he considered that the mind was the main part od the body which controlls all the sitation and the accions we can do.

On the whole, this author must had a doubt to recognize the real life and the dreams.
Therefore he was decided to doubt about the information that he was recieved through the sense. Moreover there was a moment when he decided to doubt about everything.

However, this isn't a good alternative so he admitted that if he thinks, he exists. These is the most important sentence in his phylosophy. He concluded that there was nothing more easy to know than his own spirit. He was a racionalist, who said that mathematic method was the best to arrive at succes.

Related to God, he reduced the power of gold among the society, however this witty task was too dangerous in that moments so he needed to be hidden by his friends in Holland. Even though he was reduced his power he didn't refuse his existence perhaps because this thing could be caused too problems.

Agains this fabulous author there was other english empirits such as David Hume who believed in the expierence much more that in the reason of our minds.

In my opinion, René Descartes was an impressive witty person who was decided to disucss the problems related to Gold in a problematic society. Despite it seems to has more reason the empirists I think the exeperience is not enough to do a task.
My favourite author is without any doubt Friedrich Nietzsche who is also the most recent.

Sorry, blame it on me

As life goes on I’m starting to learn more and more about ........
I realize everything I do is affecting the people around me
So I want to take this time out to apologize for things I have done
And things that have not occurred yet
And the things they don’t want to take responsibility for

I’m sorry for the times I left you home
I was on the road and you were .......
I’m sorry for the times that I had to go
I’m sorry for the fact that I did not know
That you were sitting home just wishing we
Could go back to when it was just you and me
I’m sorry for the times I would .......
I’m sorry for the times I ........

I’m sorry for the wrong things that I’ve done
I’m sorry I’m not always there for my son
I’m sorry for the fact that I'm not ........
That you can’t sleep at night when I am not there
Because I am in the streets like everyday
Sorry for the things that I did not say
Like how you are the best thing in my world
And how I'm so ....... to call you my girl

[Bridge]
I understand that there are some problems
And I am not too blind to know
All the pain you kept inside you
Even though you might not show
If I can apologize for being .....
Then it’s just a shame on me
I’ll be the reason for your pain and you can put the blame on me

[Chorus]
You can put the blame on me [4x]
Said you can put the blame on me [3x]
You can put the blame on me

Sorry for the things that he put you through
And all the times you didn’t know what to do
Sorry that you had to go and sell those packs
Just trying to stay busy till you heard from Dad
And you would rather be home with all your ......
As one big family with love and bliss
And even though Pops treated us like kings

He got a second wife and you didn’t agree
He got up and left you there all alone
I’m sorry that you had to do it on your own
I’m sorry that I went and added to your .......
I’m sorry that your son was once a .......
I’m sorry that I grew up way too fast
I wish I would’ve listened and not be so bad
I’m sorry your life turned out this way
I’m sorry that the FEDS came and took me away

[Bridge]

[Chorus]

I’m sorry that it took so long to see
They were dead wrong trying to put it on me
I’m sorry that it took so long to speak
But I was on tour with Gwen Stefani
I’m sorry for the hand that she was dealt
For the embarrassment that she felt
Just a little young girl trying to have fun
Her daddy should never let her out that young
I’m sorry for Club Zen getting shut down
I hope they manage better next time around
How was I to know she was underage
In a 21 and older club they say
Why doesn’t anybody wanna take blame
Verizon backed out disgracing my name
I’m just a singer trying to entertain
Because I love my fans I’ll take that blame
Even though the blame’s on you [3x]
I’ll take that blame from you

And you can put that blame on me [2x]
You can put that blame on me
And you can put that blame on me

Description of a person

She is particulary cheerful among all of us, also I often say that she get a big influence of the most known phylosopher Friedrich Nietzsche because she wants to live raising limits. However, occasionally she has a strong personality so be careful if she has strange day. ;)

One thing that I really like about her is that I can have a conversation talking about anything. Seeing that this year she sits beside be I knew much more about her life,feelings. Physically, she is rather preety, recently she changed her hair's colour, in my opinion, now she is more attractive. Besides, she has an ill-tempered chararcter.
Within a long time we went together to the school in Castelló, beatiful memories. Once in a while, we meet toether for study hard, so even though she has some problems whit chemistry or catalan, she is more clever that everybody knows consequently I have no doubt that she will achieve her future challenges.

One of the reasons why I envy her is because she set out to be a doctor or other jobs related to biotechnology so she need a high mark.I never can't done it because the battle with my own nerves probably will overcome me.

Sometimes she seems to be a bit crazy, however I really think she is a charming women so she isn't selfish like I said many times in class. In general she is extroverted, kind but she isn't fit enough yet :), however we will go together to the gym to solve this little problem. kisses...