11 Vilabertran Road
Castelló d’ Empúries
Girona
17486
12-01-09
The Headmistress
IES Castelló d’ Empúries
C/ Rentador 7
Dear Madam,
I like to talk about atvantages and disvantages of this school. In my opinion, the school looks like a prison, a lot of people of other countries think the same. They think is a prison for young people.
The majority of the teachers are correct but some of them aren’ t very good.
Advantages are: It’ s near my home, I don’ t have to travel by bus , the classrooms of science and technology are very correct, and the playground is very big.
Disatvantages are: The school looks like a prison, for the number of people the school is too small. There aren’ t enough trees in the playground and the food we have to eat in the dining room is not very good.
I hope that my critical letter doesn’ t make you angry.
Best wishes.
Francesc Farrés.
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Observation your oral presentation
Topic:Football
I use pictures about football story and players. I use a video about Ronaldinho. The resources that I used aren't attractive but are original.
I don't looked the audience most of the time, but sometimes I have looked them.
I have notes but I don't read this notes. I did moviments every moment because I was very nervous.
I organized the ideas in order of importance and in correct order. Only I used the discourse marke:Finally.
For the people that knows about soccer not, for the other if. I looked up the information in the internet. My information was not superficial, but was neither detailed. Was normal.
I have used my grammar but I haven't used rich vocabulary. I' ve used new expressions, for example: Legend. I have used a lot of sentence linkers( and, but , also..) and I have used fillers, ( well, for example, one second)
I haven' t pronounce words correct. I've found in a dictionary the letters and the pronunciation. I haven' t changed my tone of voice. I utilized with breaks and interruptions continuum.
I get a mark of 6,25.
I use pictures about football story and players. I use a video about Ronaldinho. The resources that I used aren't attractive but are original.
I don't looked the audience most of the time, but sometimes I have looked them.
I have notes but I don't read this notes. I did moviments every moment because I was very nervous.
I organized the ideas in order of importance and in correct order. Only I used the discourse marke:Finally.
For the people that knows about soccer not, for the other if. I looked up the information in the internet. My information was not superficial, but was neither detailed. Was normal.
I have used my grammar but I haven't used rich vocabulary. I' ve used new expressions, for example: Legend. I have used a lot of sentence linkers( and, but , also..) and I have used fillers, ( well, for example, one second)
I haven' t pronounce words correct. I've found in a dictionary the letters and the pronunciation. I haven' t changed my tone of voice. I utilized with breaks and interruptions continuum.
I get a mark of 6,25.
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In Catalonia there are a lot of prostitutes. Girona is the province where we can find most of them. The police find the girls in La Jonquera. The town's mayor Jordi Cabezas says that the problem "will not be resolved until firm actions is taken by the politicians". Cabezas says he fell frustated by the town's inability to take action.
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