Formal Letter

11 Vilabertran Road
Castelló d’ Empúries
Girona
17486
12-01-09

The Headmistress
IES Castelló d’ Empúries
C/ Rentador 7


Dear Madam,

I like to talk about atvantages and disvantages of this school. In my opinion, the school looks like a prison, a lot of people of other countries think the same. They think is a prison for young people.

The majority of the teachers are correct but some of them aren’ t very good.

Advantages are: It’ s near my home, I don’ t have to travel by bus , the classrooms of science and technology are very correct, and the playground is very big.

Disatvantages are: The school looks like a prison, for the number of people the school is too small. There aren’ t enough trees in the playground and the food we have to eat in the dining room is not very good.

I hope that my critical letter doesn’ t make you angry.

Best wishes.




Francesc Farrés.

Observation your oral presentation

Topic:Football

I use pictures about football story and players. I use a video about Ronaldinho. The resources that I used aren't attractive but are original.
I don't looked the audience most of the time, but sometimes I have looked them.
I have notes but I don't read this notes. I did moviments every moment because I was very nervous.
I organized the ideas in order of importance and in correct order. Only I used the discourse marke:Finally.
For the people that knows about soccer not, for the other if. I looked up the information in the internet. My information was not superficial, but was neither detailed. Was normal.
I have used my grammar but I haven't used rich vocabulary. I' ve used new expressions, for example: Legend. I have used a lot of sentence linkers( and, but , also..) and I have used fillers, ( well, for example, one second)
I haven' t pronounce words correct. I've found in a dictionary the letters and the pronunciation. I haven' t changed my tone of voice. I utilized with breaks and interruptions continuum.
I get a mark of 6,25.

Catalonia news

In Catalonia there are a lot of prostitutes. Girona is the province where we can find most of them. The police find the girls in La Jonquera. The town's mayor Jordi Cabezas says that the problem "will not be resolved until firm actions is taken by the politicians". Cabezas says he fell frustated by the town's inability to take action.
Complaints from local authorities about felling vulnerable and impotent in the face of the problem is common. He says, adding that it is the Catalan and Spanish government that shoul find a solution. I have learnt: prostitutes, authorities and Coplains.

Dialogue Albert & Fran

My oral presentation About Football

Thirteen & Adrian Mole

Thirteen is a film which talks about topics of drugs, sex, cuts herself...

Tracy' s a good student a decent girl and afterwards she is a rebel adolescent who uses drugs, cuts herself and is sexually promiscuous. The fault of this change is Evie Zamora and Tracy because  Tracy's mother doesn' t realize of this change. Tracy at the begining is jelaous of Evie because Evie's the best girl of school. Tracy makes like this because Evie is a bad girl. Evie isn't a good model to Tracy. For me this isn't Adrian Mole's next step. The difference is that in Adrian Mole the story is for a teenage boy and his typical life, and he doesn't take drugs, or cuts  himself, and in Thirteen the girls are sexually promiscuous and they are crazy. I know live someone who same experiences but this people are problematic. I don't know anything similar of girls in film Thirteen, I don't drug and never cut myself. Tracy is a fashion victim because he has influence of other crazy girl. The problem in the house of Tracy is that her father is not there and her mother stay with a drug person and Tracy's hates it. The film is very shocking. The most shocking film for me is Diamantes de Sangre.

Thirteen

Is a very good film but i don' t understant this tittle. Tracy is a young girl of thirteen years and she and his family live in small house in United States. Her brother is rapper and in school Evie Zamora is the best girl. Tracy one day meet whit Evie in a clothes shop and they still very much money to a person. The mother of Evie is a fucker and she is cool. Evie and Tracy was snorting drug. At finally of the film the mother of Tracy discovered the money robed and drug and she is very woory.

Halloween night in Castelló

Halloween’ s night in Castelló

For Halloween, we run a lot because in Catalunya there aren’ t a typical party. My friend Albert and I decided to go around the village and do trick or trucks.

After the party, we went to a policeman’ s house to do trick or trucks and the door was opened, we were very worried. We went into the house and in the bathroom there was a skeleton from someone. My friends run but the house was close. I was left alone and I decided to phone my brother but she was asleep.

Later, I found Albert in the bed and her blood on the floor. I was very nervous and decided to jump trough the window to the garden,while I was jumping somebody caught me…it was Albert and he was covered in blood.
Behind Albert there was a men with knife and two heads tied in her belt.

We jumped trought the window and went to my house. This night we have nightmare’s and we will never celebrate Halloween in Catalunya again.



The End

My live

Hi my name is Francesc and I’m sixteen years old. The reason why I decide to begin batxillerat is the best option for my future. My father is farmer and my mother is secretary. I don’t like this jobs. I prefer work in a shop of medicine. My hobby is football and my favourite team is Barça. I listen rap music, 50 Cent is the best.
This year I was very worry because batxillerat is very difficult. I has one brother an her name is Roger and he begin this year in the I.E.S Castelló d’ Empúries. Byee!!